Improved allied battleship

Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:11 am Post subject: Improved allied battleship

Yet another battleship, and my first voxel thats normalized with 7.1 normals
Please give constructive criticism only, thank you.

UPDATED: no windows.

7/1/08-UPDATE:lighter color to the deck in a second version.

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Disruptor · Grenadier **Joined**: 09 May 2006 **Location**: Maryland

Now thats American! Cool

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Mortecha · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:27 am Post subject:

Thats a really good voxel mate. I think it would look better if all the windows / 1*1*1 black pixels where removed on the superstructure, asside from that its great.

Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:31 am Post subject:

Noted, ill post a few versions after a few more people give input.

BrianPrime · Shrapnel Sniper **Joined**: 26 Jul 2007

That's pretty sweet dude. Only qualms are with the hull/general brightness.. doesn't seem quite right. The mast looks great alongside the ACC, as does most of the ship, it just seems a tad off. I just cant put my finger on it.

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Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:40 am Post subject:

maybe some of the colors i used, of all the ships i have made this one was the biggest pain to figure out a good scheme..and still it is off..yes.

I'll see what I can do.

Clarkson · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 2:41 am Post subject:

The black dots really kill the quality that is this. Fix them and re-release it please.

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CCHyper · Defense Minister **Joined**: 07 Apr 2005

Now... thats a awesome ship!, shame RA2/YR did not "ship" with "ships" like that Very Happy

I call for the Spotlight tower to shine over here Wink

Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 3:46 am Post subject:

Updated above.

Thanks for your suggestions everyone.

Renegangsta · Cyborg Commando **Joined**: 02 Aug 2007 **Location**: meh

Gotta tip 4 ya: raise the ship about 3-6 pixels, it looks like its a bit sunk

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Clarkson · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 4:29 am Post subject:

Holy shit dude. Nice. Muuch better there.

Now re-do the rest of the navy. #Tongue

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Mortecha · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 5:38 am Post subject:

Tony, mate that is one nice voxel. I give my vote for a spotlight!!

Crimsonum · Seth **Joined**: 14 Jul 2005 **Location**: Fineland

Impressive, but the deck doesn't seem to fit the parts of the ship very well. Also, it doesn't look right when the control room(s) are that bright, whereas the turrets and other parts aren't.

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Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 6:00 am Post subject:

Renegangsta wrote:

Gotta tip 4 ya: raise the ship about 3-6 pixels, it looks like its a bit sunk

NO! ships with tall hulls look ztyping retarded!!

@ Yuri07, you are within your right to fix it to fit your preference.

Don · Disk Thrower **Joined**: 16 Aug 2007 **Location**: India

SPOTLIGHT!!!!!!!!!

Dupl3xxx · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:25 am Post subject:

It's GREAT, but I tested some here and there, AN 5.6 wiht Rang5 and smooth on is somewhat better! If you look really close at the front, you'll see it's not 100%, only 98% Rolling Eyes

Even though, I vote spotlight, as this may be the best naval voxel ever!

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SaneDisruption · Cyborg Cannon **Joined**: 14 Feb 2007

im going to have to agree with dupl3xxx here. it is the best naval voxel ive ever seen. congrats tony, i believe you have a spotlight here, you have my vote thats for sure.

Oshog · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:51 am Post subject:

Spotlight.

I am completelly in awe of this beauty.

Gaffel · AA Infantry **Joined**: 27 Mar 2006

Spotlight this. Its awsome good work

ORCACommander · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 12:27 pm Post subject:

spotlight. now if we could only give the deck a wooden texture without making it look like crap oh well. spotlight

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BrianPrime · Shrapnel Sniper **Joined**: 26 Jul 2007

Looks excellent now.

"For the best beer in town, get Spot Lite. Nothing beats the cold and refreshing taste of a job well done."

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Oshog · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 4:26 pm Post subject:

Who drinks Light stuff? That sucks so badly...especially beer. Beer needs to have at least 12 percent alcohol and a dark, mean look. Or red. #Tongue

Renegangsta · Cyborg Commando **Joined**: 02 Aug 2007 **Location**: meh

ehh well i guess this is it. although a little detail couldn't hurt DO IT! or don't...

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Lt Albrecht · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 5:12 pm Post subject:

IAlthough I'm a newb and under the new proposals for spotlights I won't be able to vote I'm going to meke the most of it.

VXL+INGAME+EPIC COOLNESS= SPOTLIGHT

The superstruccture kinda reminds me of a King Gerorge V class WWII battleship (Boxy, but not in a bad way). On a side note I reckon it should be able to take on 5 or so Dreds and win... on looks alone.

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Tony · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 8:56 pm Post subject:

you people rock. Very Happy

I think I'll make an entire navy for allies, soviets, and yuri. but no promises yet cause voxeling is boring Laughing

DeathMummy · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:04 pm Post subject:

why is this UBER amazing voxel not spotlighted yet??
(spotlight- from me)

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Muldrake · Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 9:11 pm Post subject:

Well, I guess we all know where this is moving to, eh?

A job well done, Tony. Although I will agree with Yuri, in thinking that, I think it'd be better if the turrets were of the same colour as the command deck. Also some texture on the main deck would really help give it a bit of a nice finish.
But it still deserves a spotlight as it is now.

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